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Old 03-23-2001, 07:03 AM   #1
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must be the spring time...

Slush warning:

She is my beach
The unreachable shore
I wish to overcome the wave
and the tempest roar

I wish we could be together
Even for the shortest of times
If only for the once
To be lost in her arms

To stroke her hair and caress her lips
To let go to the greatest and most basic of needs
To come to terms with the rushing of blood through my veins

Oh she is heaven sent
An angel resplendent
In morning glory of beauty
What more would I want
Perhaps except for our embrace
To last a lifetime

I have rediscovered my want to reach
She is my shore, She is my beach
In my dreams Shes already been reached

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Old 03-23-2001, 02:29 PM   #2
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absolutely, totally gorgeous...lucky girl, I hope she knows

I'm glad to hear from you froggie...I don't go to chat that often so I don't see ya anymore...
hope Inter's doing great (right now I'm pissed off at the Flyers...losing to a pathetic team that was on a 8 game losing streak with a new coach )!!
hehehe April's coming and then I'm gonna be crying

Just the bang and the clatter
As an angel runs to ground...

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Old 03-23-2001, 05:32 PM   #3
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Very lucky girl

Hope she ahem nurses your spring fever.

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Old 03-23-2001, 09:07 PM   #4
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HAHA, frogbat, i totally agree with you. Spring is most definately in the air! You're in love, i'm in love, my friends are in love with love, its all great! In fact,i like this poem so much, i think i will put up one that compliments it well. It's been awhile since i've posted something here, but i think the one I'll put up fits our current mood, frogbat!
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Old 03-24-2001, 01:46 AM   #5
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spring forth sweet love!

this post brought to you courtesy of the NJ Devils 13 game winning streak
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Old 03-27-2001, 06:30 AM   #6
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I have been reading your poetry since I came to this board.I dont care if you dont want my opinion cause Im going to give it anyway.

I think that was the most beautiful thing you've ever written.
But then Im a girl, we're suckers for that stuff.


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