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The Feelings That We Conceal!

There are things that we feel
That we do conceal

His father has died
She can't believe she lied

Sadly, he looks up to the sky
And wishes he would die

We have emotions that we keep in our heart
Soon, someday we might fall apart

Please know that you must get out of this mess now
Take everybody's hand, even if you don't know how

Do you like it? It is a little dramatic and in simple content.
 
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We have emotions that we keep in our heart
Soon, someday we might fall apart

That is my fave lines of the poem. I really love your poems. I should save them all... lol. I'm going to save this one if taht's ok with you. Is it? This one is my fave!
 
Here is another one called "Deepspace!" Sorry, it is is in simple content, again. Also in the 3 verese they deal with some of my problems that I am dealing with.

Please take me to deepspace
I want to get out of this place
I want to find I different kind of grace

I want to lie on a puffy cloud
Get out of the annoying life crowd
And like Bono says "Dream out loud"

I want to get helped out by a sweet angel
I want to believe that the Bible is Thy word
I want to get away from stuff that abuses your fate

I want don't want the alien to say "Die", I want to feel its love
Alien LOVE running through my veins, over and above
Like Madness says "I want to sing with the wings of a dove"

Sorry, guys, I am really not that weird. Is it o.k.?
 
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Hey...I love both!! They are nice...!!
So...you became a writing machine??? ;)
Go ahead girl....spell it out!!

I need to go now!!
Bye bye lovely girls!! Behave yourself...will you???
Love Tania
 
Here is another poemof mine called "Simply Love."

You will live happily ever after
If you cherish love for what it is
Just like children with laughter

Everyone simply cannot live without love
Because everyone needs to feel affection
Just like everybody needs the Lord, above

So, love please kiss us and please hug us
Because love is definitely the best thing ever
Because it will never does mean to bug us

Do ou like it? I hope it doesn't sound to sappy for you.
 
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It's pretty good for a love poem. I don't really like Love things though, I don't know why:uhoh:
I do like it though. And know what you're thinking, I listen to U2's music which is lovey stuff... but... the love songs arn't my fave songs of them lol.
 
Hey, I understand. Bono says love songs make him throw up. U2 does write love songs and bittersweet love songs. This isn't sussposed to be romantic-lover type but how love is the best thing we got.
 
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