Maiden Name

[ZeroDude]

Atheism is bullshit,
Religion is fraud,
The only one I'll answer to,
Happens to be God,
For he is a tempest,
A permanent display,
Of everyone and everything,
You've ever had to pay,
The price that is waning,
Dying in the night,
My truth as lies never live,
To bear the rising tide..................

For in the morning,
Our mother's all the same,
Grieving for the children,
Allah's maiden name,
Torn from the breast,
Suckling from our love,
For all the love this world can give,
Will it be enough?

 

[Mullen4Prez]

I like the start it reminds of zootv for some reason. Good writing, maybe someday you can be as good as me

 

[the rockin edge]

very nice

 

[For Honor]

will it be enough........


I suppose we can't really change the world, but we can change the world inside ourselves, and hopefully that manifestation will become a new reality...


For some reason, I am reminded of "Mothers of the disappeared", though I really don't know much about that song. I never listen to the lyrics, it seems, just that music

 

[wizard2c]

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Good Zero Dude.

"My truth as lies never live,".....interesting thought.

carol
wizard2c

 

[wizard2c]

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Zero Dude....write some more.....like to read your writings....they give me insight.

carol
wizard2c

 

[ZeroDude]

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Zero Dude....write some more.....like to read your writings....they give me insight.

carol
wizard2c

I've been away for a while, I have some rather menial business to sort out, but I'm always writing I just haven't been able to post it up yet.