Live With the Polar Bears!!

[Cute Irish Bono]

Here's another poem I wrote. I hope Bono will see it when and if I get to show it to him. This poem doesn't have a pattern and that bugs me!

Who cares
If in my dreams
It always seems
To live with the polar bears

Where I have seen
And been with polar bears who aren't mean
Matter of fact they never bite
But give hug with all their might
They give kisses like my pup
And they'll always be my lttle buttercup

So it'll only do harm
If I hear my alarm

Let me dream more of this fantasy
Polar bears bring your love as you come to me

Is this poem too corny?

 

[TheWho4Life]

Why would you ask if it was cory? Its not corny. Better than I could ever do. I like it.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Thanks! It's one of my pep peeves that my poem has to have an exact pattern and rhymes. Oh, well, maybe Ill get over it. Thanks, again!!

 

[TheWho4Life]

Your welcome hehe

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

TheWho4Life, it's up to you, but can you please just try to write a poem and post it on Dream Out Loud. I know you'll put your heart into it, so I'll be great!!

 

[TheWho4Life]

Ill try... lol.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

O.K., Cutie! I am happy to see you post journal entries. It's sort of funny we're bascially the only ones posting back and forth. I kinda like that! When I see that you're on line a smile comes across my face!!

 

[TheWho4Life]

Oh same here! Its ok if we just post back and forth right? I mean people wont get mad will tehy?

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Probably no. It's funny and great how we're having our own converstation in this forum!

 

[TheWho4Life]

I know its awsome! COurse other peeps are welcome to talk too lol. But its ok!

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Yeah, I agree!

 

[TheWho4Life]

Hehe, I wrote a poem should i post it? I think its bad though. Its all i could think of.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Shut up! Give yourself more credited! I will probably like it, and if don't it really won't matter. I could still the talent in it. Please post it!

 

[TheWho4Life]

Ok, Ill post it but... yea. I dont like it but ill just say i do! lol.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

I read it, and I liked it. Please shut up, and see that is it a good poem!

 

[TheWho4Life]

LOL. Ok I'll shut up, bu tI dont know if I can see that its a good poem lol.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

I truly wish you could! I think it' most inportant for the person who wrote a poem to like it, if they like it. Sorry, am I being to hard on you? I'm sorry if I am.

 

[TheWho4Life]

LOL, no your not being hard on me dont worry. Its growin on me. . Should I add more to it?

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Maybe a little bit. But it's fine the way it is.

 

[TheWho4Life]

Oh well in taht case ill leave it the way it is cause i cant think of anything else

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

O.K. Did you have fun doing the dishes? LOL!

 

[TheWho4Life]

LOL, oh it was great.... NOT! Well ill just tell you about my school here .
Um...what do you wanna know? LOL.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Do you like to learn? What's your favorite subject?

 

[TheWho4Life]

HA! No I don't like to learn, my grades are bad! LOL. My fave. subjsect... right now it would either be biology because I like it or algebra because the teacher is awsome! do you like ot learn?

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

Yes and no. I think english and algrebra and geomentry isn't that bad!

 

[TheWho4Life]

You're 13 and your in algebra and geometry? Geese you must be smart. Hey i was wondering are you rich? Its ok if you dont wanna answer, hehe.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

I can't answer, sorry. Yeah, I'm very intelligent, but I need to use more often in school. And my teacher sees that I'm ready to do both. I am not done with alegbra 1, though. It's so amazing how, like I'm using formuals in geometry, it's wondeful how if you do it right, the math all works out! Also it has to do with being in a private school doing both maths.

 

[TheWho4Life]

Geese, I wish I was smart. Heck your 13, you probley know way more than me! LOL. My grades are... um... yea. LOL. Have you been in a private school all your life? Im in a public school, been in the same district since kindergarden too. Im not popular though... but I dont really wanna be lol.

 

[Cute Irish Bono]

No just for two years! Keith Moon!! Keith Moon!!

 

[TheWho4Life]

Cool, Keith Moon? Yea he is part of The Who... you wanna see pics or something? lol!