Life

[Tania]

Life
It’s doing my head in
Never good enough
Never wanted enough
Not smart enough
Didn’t work hard enough
Didn’t earn enough
Didn’t live enough
Didn’t laugh enough
Didn’t give enough
Didn’t know enough
Didn’t look the part
Didn’t speak the words
Didn’t want to start
Didn’t want to end
Didn’t need the bruise
Didn’t fit the bill
Never good enough
This isn't a life

 

[ZeroDude]

Life is but a phase of which you feel wronged and you've expressed it well in your piece, I can see your emotions run strong, so I will take this sentiment bend it to my will, I will write a song about life and all it's ills

Cheers for the inspiration, nice piece hits home hard with the repetition and the structure

 

[Tania]

Thanks Zero. Going through a velly hard time at the moment but that's okay gotta laugh or you cry (and I'm sick of crying).

Looking forward to your inspiration!

 

[ZeroDude]

^
Thats a great way to think, I always try to concentrate on the positive myself to get me through, and I hope you'll be fine at the end