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Elessarian

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A stone wall crumbles
under the weight
of blood-colored vines
creeping into the cracks.
We take note of the symmetry,
the strength of the bricks,
and dismiss the thorns and the leaves
as a nuisance, a menace.
The skies grow dark overhead
and what was once blue
surrenders to black
overtaken.

Veins run with a royal blue
and the royalty escapes our notice
but not our condemnation.
The stones of the wall begin to weep
and the garden hides itself in a mist.
Despair dwells within,
on its knees, pleading,
and still we sleep like slaves after the harvest.

A lifetime passes.
The vines now grow within us
encroaching our walls with a power unknown.
I stand in a field of ice
listening for the breaks of branches against glass,
the shivering of trees and dark blue pools.
Wonder impenetrable.

I think of a love like fire
a void of understanding
filled by the blood unspilt
and warmed by the blood in the ground.
The stones insist on remaining,
but I climb over and into the garden.
Into the mist of a love like fire.

Here we persist,
stumbling through the shadow,
visible only to some,
and to ourselves as conspicuous
as pinpricks on the surface of the moon.




The Seventh Hold

Singing, flying, wind and sails
sky and sea, swift winged gales,
Like whispers recalled
mine need to record this,
white on white--life stalled,
thy heart can afford this.

Water sparkling azure stones,
angels have this to thee loaned
a slice of heaven,
Yet doth the sweeter scene
in gold decks seven
lie walled in Midas dreams?

I witness it here to be,
more bounties shine in thee.
 
E, damn!!! You blew me away! They are both soooo good!

I was trying to pick a part of the first one I liked best, but its the whole thing that gets to me! You have some serious talent going on there.
 
And *now* I remember why my scribbles stay on scraps of paper in a dark corner of the trash can :wink:

Glad you decided to let them see the light of day. :hug:
Honestly, these are *very* well done. I love the imagery, word choice, how it flows....You clearly have a talent.
:up: :up:
:bow:



VintagePunk said:
You're the Bono of poetry. Deep, multifaceted, so many layers to strip away. The imagery, the use of words to paint a picture.

I'm in awe.

:yes: Ditto.
 
Sonnet No. 22

Return to the strand, thy work is now done
while they labor and toil on fields of dust,
bondage decaying under misplaced lust
thou art ever strong and ever the one.
Doth the jeweled talisman enrich thine air?
If splendors of earth and coal prove thy mold
If silk is silk and truth fashioned in gold
I’d reward your trial in opulent fair.
Come back to the home, happiness has sprung
out of ocean quakes, our island divine
where treasures are in new doses of time,
and the grandest triumph’s my love rewon
Though we might dream of imperial states,
thou are the prize mighty kings emulate.


Autumn Flowers

September moon rises slow
and cools the midday showers.
Beneath the earth the soil emits
A fragrance of wistful powers.
Some tiny scarlet trumpets
herald the breaking light
and virgin blooms are released
from the blanket of cloudy night.
The sprouts are fresh and new,
they direct the falling leaves.
And signal golden hues
to blend with amber trees.
For just a single moment,
to state their nature's reason
how blessed to see announced
the changing of the season!
Summer grass turns to weeds,
lilies fade with passing hours,
icy birch will melt away,
but nothing harms the autumn flowers.


Copyright 1993, 1994
 
Eles, you are truly a gifted Poet. You shouldn't be shy about sharing your words, they are thought provoking, touching and just plain beautiful.

:hug:
 
I feel like I'm always pointing out lines I like, but that's what always gets my attention.

"Some tiny scarlet trumpets
herald the breaking light
and virgin blooms are released
from the blanket of cloudy night."

nice little bit there. both of those poems extremely well crafted.
 
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