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Old 08-02-2002, 12:16 AM   #1
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"Invisible Lines"

Invisible Lines

life is the space
between the territory
I have now come to walk upon --
only to find
the lines I create
dissolve
with each further step
into intention
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Old 08-03-2002, 02:45 AM   #2
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i wish you'd share more of your writing with us here, Michael.

such precision, care and articulation

is articulation even a word? lol
great stuff babe!
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Old 08-03-2002, 06:35 PM   #3
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Hey Zooie,

Thanks for the props, but this isn't even the right version! I wrote it down by memory, but I forgot a part at the beginning -- so I'll edit it now! Oh, it won't let me edit, so I'll re-do it in a reply. Talk soon...
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Old 08-03-2002, 06:38 PM   #4
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Here's the "real" version...

Invisible Lines

life is the space
between the territory
I have now come to walk upon --
only to find
the lines I create
dissolve
with each further step
into intention
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Old 08-03-2002, 06:42 PM   #5
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good stuff Michael, though for me I think the lines are still there whiring and buzzing all over and I trip on them constantly

it'd be very nice if you started posting more in this place, there are very few of us oldies left!
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Old 08-03-2002, 11:45 PM   #6
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this is great, Michael. I'll add my vote and say you should come back more often too.
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Old 08-04-2002, 02:04 AM   #7
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