"Invisible Lines"

[Michael Griffiths]

Invisible Lines

life is the space
between the territory
I have now come to walk upon --
only to find
the lines I create
dissolve
with each further step
into intention

 

[zooropamanda]

i wish you'd share more of your writing with us here, Michael.

such precision, care and articulation

is articulation even a word? lol
great stuff babe!

 

[Michael Griffiths]

Hey Zooie,

Thanks for the props, but this isn't even the right version! I wrote it down by memory, but I forgot a part at the beginning -- so I'll edit it now! Oh, it won't let me edit, so I'll re-do it in a reply. Talk soon...

 

[Michael Griffiths]

Here's the "real" version...

Invisible Lines

life is the space
between the territory
I have now come to walk upon --
only to find
the lines I create
dissolve
with each further step
into intention

 

[The Wanderer]

good stuff Michael, though for me I think the lines are still there whiring and buzzing all over and I trip on them constantly

it'd be very nice if you started posting more in this place, there are very few of us oldies left!

 

[BabyGrace]

this is great, Michael. I'll add my vote and say you should come back more often too.

 

[foray]

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