Interstate Exodus

[starsgoblue]

Interstate Exodus

Highway ramp in her headlights,
And a bruise upon her cheek.
This love (this hate) was too strong-
Made her spirit meek.
Well, that?s not today,
That?s not her lot,
She?s making do now with what?s she?s got.

Chorus:
A trunkful of broken dreams,
Memories fading in the rearview mirror.
She?s leaving this city and it?s dirty schemes
She?s gonna be a brand new star.
She?s gonna be a brand new star.

Nothing but light to guide her path,
She presses on through a new dark road.
Reaching to hold the man hanging around her neck,
She knows she is never going back.

Chorus

Bridge:
She not returning,believe it.
She?s gonna achieve it.
You couldn?t break her spirit.
Her blindness has now been cured,
And she knows a love that will endure.

A brand new star?
Yes she is
Yeah, she?s gonna be
Gonna be?
Be a brand new star?

 

[my_kite]

WOW...I really love the way you write!!!
One of the things I think I neeed to improove is my vocabulaire! You know, being portuguese, sometimes i miss some words...! But you have it girl!! I like it a lot!! Keep it up! And Dream Out Loud!

 

[starsgoblue]

My_kite your vocabulary is great, don't worry bout that! Thanks for the compliments though You could get a rhyming dictionary that also includes synonyms and related words....that has helped me before alot with finding THE word. Rock on!

 

[starsgoblue]

Fuckin' A! It happened to this one too.... there is question marks and other things that were NOT put in by me in my original post. Where did they come from?! How can this be fixed....this is ridiculous.....I can't edit them myself because the time limit has expired. A mod needs to help with this please.

 

[starsgoblue]

HELP