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vaz02

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Ok, this is my first song i wrote and it pretty much came to me within 20 mins. Honest opinions are very much welcome.

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You’re the queen of our sincerity
The individual guarding my complexity
The darkness locking my honesty
The cannon besieging my embassy

Its time
That gives us this grace
Its time
The one true leader of the human race
Its time
That will keep it in place
Its time


Its my one true voice that will break us in
Light behind my violin
Our Temptation is not a sin
Love kills all its believes in

Its time
That gives us this grace
Its time
The one true leader of the human race
Its time
That will keep it in place
Its time


Its hope and love that believe in me
Time killed our community
It’s our insanity that will set us free
And our mercy that will feed upon me

Its time
That gives us this grace
Its time
The one true leader of the human race
Its time
That will keep it in place
Its time


Its this moment that im in
Blue white waves that im drowning in
Hells own embers that im fearing in
God lord help us
Im repenting
In Time
In Time
In Time

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Im going to change some things but i would like some feed back now, just for a confidence boost really.
 
Its time
That takes us here
Its time
Love, will keep us near
Its time
The revolutions here
Its time
That will, take us from here
Its time


New Chorus
 
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