I got bored I wrote this...... "Seraphim"

[bono-vox]

He slowly treads among a patchwork sky,
Waiting for the silhouetted night to give way
Open up to the brightest star
She brazenly snatches him away
Plucks him admist a crowd of golden pearls
He takes his final bow
She overcomes the darkness
And will reign in a new world

 

[ACROB@T]

He slowly treads among a patchwork sky,
Waiting for the silhouetted night to give way

lovely opening especially bono-v...great read

 

[bono-vox]

Thanks ACROB@T

 

[The_Sweetest_Thing]

Originally posted by bono-vox:
He slowly treads among a patchwork sky,
Waiting for the silhouetted night to give way
Open up to the brightest star
She brazenly snatches him away
Plucks him admist a crowd of golden pearls
He takes his final bow
She overcomes the darkness
And will reign in a new world

This is gorgeous. It reminds me old poetry--stuff written long, long ago. Gawd, I love this. Thank you

 

[bono-vox]

aaaaw your sweet

sweetest thing

 

[doodles]

its amazing bonovox darling! the imagry used it soo beautiful i wish i could write like you! my fave line is...
"Plucks him admist a crowd of golden pearls" so gorgeous. 'fraid i havent posted in ages, i never find le time.

Doodles


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*~Doodles~* "he's not the messiah, hes a very naughty boy!"

 

[bono-vox]

lol emma!! ....come here more often, you have time to go on the stargate forum and drool over danny

oh and thx for the reply, have fun ironing!

 

[zooropamanda]

that is really very pretty bono vox

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*I am a cowgirl of funk*

 

[bono-vox]

Manda your poems are great. i love them!