i can't think of a title

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blueyedpoet

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the B-man can be heard in some of this...not that i'm nearly as good..


Through satellites
I love to make love
twisting and crawling
scratching and biting
aesthetics beamed with ones and zeros
she’s got wi-fi
and she’s gonna make me scream

intimacy reached across the horizon
I’m reachin’ but not touchin’
tv screen and skinamax
and I’ve never felt more alone
and I’ve never felt so far from home
she comes from outer space
and she’s gonna make me scream

her satellites aren’t of love
they make love
is it really out there?
Is this really art?
fucked up on ecstacy
brought to you by design

she’s got wi-fi
she comes from outer space
junkie’s on tv
and she’s gonna make me scream
 
I like it except you don't really have a viable message, also I find it quite confused well thats why I find it confused, good attempt though, try to create your own style of writing and be influenced by the world around you it will help you out:wink:
 
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