Honest Opinions - U2 Feedback

Go Back   U2 Feedback > United Colours > Dream Out Loud (and in Colour!)
Click Here to Login
Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
 
Old 01-15-2001, 10:10 PM   #1
Babyface
 
Join Date: Dec 2000
Location: Westboro, MASS, USA
Posts: 2
Local Time: 10:03 PM
Honest Opinions

I wrote this while listening to 'Please'...I felt like I was moving\floating....And no I wasn't on drugz (haha lol).....but here it is tell me what ya think (FYI....i had some music in my head while I was writing so give it a chance.....it may not flow well.....try listening to PLEASE)(FYI....absolve any spelling errors...thanx...lol):

Title: Struck By Passing Time

"Your passion speaks to me in subtle ways,
eyes pressing on my love through the days.
Tears that I'd rather not see,
Pain inflicted - I wish it was me.
Your all I've got - your all I need,
I see your frozen stance - I cannot heed.

(Refrain): But 2nite there's only you,
For us - maybe tomorrow something new.
We live in hope and die in grace,
I dream of your sweet mind and taste.
Struck by little time we have together,
You will pass - but we'll again be like feathers

We find new shadows on our path,
Led by primal wrath.
You've shown me so much,
I will cry - Longing for your touch.

(Refrain)

You see me dream,
My time to kill,
You know who I am,
See thoguh my shadows,
Time has shown me beauties hand,
Your eyes grow old w\the day we dread

(Refrain)


Thanx.....Peace out, Rock On, and U2 is the best band ever assembled!!!!!!!!!


------------------
REMEMBER: "We crossed the line - Who pushed who over? It doesn't mater to you...It matters to me..."
~So Cruel
__________________

mirror_ball_man is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-15-2001, 10:46 PM   #2
Rock n' Roll Doggie
VIP PASS
 
zooropamanda's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2000
Location: Smile, you're reading my post
Posts: 6,515
Local Time: 08:03 AM
That was good mirrorball man. I could hear it in my head.

"For us - maybe tomorrow something new.
We live in hope and die in grace,"

I like these lines.

Hey, we all write over in the dream out loud section, you should come join us and post some more!
__________________

zooropamanda is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-15-2001, 10:53 PM   #3
Rock n' Roll Doggie
VIP PASS
 
zooropamanda's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2000
Location: Smile, you're reading my post
Posts: 6,515
Local Time: 08:03 AM
Okay now I think *I'm* on drugs.
I thought I was in Free your mind

hehehehehehehe
zooropamanda is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-15-2001, 10:56 PM   #4
The Fly
 
Join Date: Sep 2000
Location: In God's Country
Posts: 149
Local Time: 10:03 PM
I like it! I couldn't vision it to music....
but that didn't matter. It's great! Good
lyrics. You do this often?
U2junkie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 01-15-2001, 11:00 PM   #5
Kid A
 
The Wanderer's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2000
Location: Holy Roman Empire
Posts: 5,271
Local Time: 05:03 PM
that's good mirror ball man!

Struck by little time we have together,
You will pass - but we'll again be like feathers




I will refer frogbatton to this thread, this is one for him...
The Wanderer is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 05:03 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.8 Beta 1
Copyright ©2000 - 2018, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Design, images and all things inclusive copyright © Interference.com