Honest Opinions

[mirror_ball_man]

I wrote this while listening to 'Please'...I felt like I was moving\floating....And no I wasn't on drugz (haha lol).....but here it is tell me what ya think (FYI....i had some music in my head while I was writing so give it a chance.....it may not flow well.....try listening to PLEASE)(FYI....absolve any spelling errors...thanx...lol):

Title: Struck By Passing Time

"Your passion speaks to me in subtle ways,
eyes pressing on my love through the days.
Tears that I'd rather not see,
Pain inflicted - I wish it was me.
Your all I've got - your all I need,
I see your frozen stance - I cannot heed.

(Refrain): But 2nite there's only you,
For us - maybe tomorrow something new.
We live in hope and die in grace,
I dream of your sweet mind and taste.
Struck by little time we have together,
You will pass - but we'll again be like feathers

We find new shadows on our path,
Led by primal wrath.
You've shown me so much,
I will cry - Longing for your touch.

(Refrain)

You see me dream,
My time to kill,
You know who I am,
See thoguh my shadows,
Time has shown me beauties hand,
Your eyes grow old w\the day we dread

(Refrain)


Thanx.....Peace out, Rock On, and U2 is the best band ever assembled!!!!!!!!!


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REMEMBER: "We crossed the line - Who pushed who over? It doesn't mater to you...It matters to me..."
~So Cruel

 

[zooropamanda]

That was good mirrorball man. I could hear it in my head.

"For us - maybe tomorrow something new.
We live in hope and die in grace,"

I like these lines.

Hey, we all write over in the dream out loud section, you should come join us and post some more!

 

[zooropamanda]

Okay now I think *I'm* on drugs.
I thought I was in Free your mind

hehehehehehehe

 

[U2junkie]

I like it! I couldn't vision it to music....
but that didn't matter. It's great! Good
lyrics. You do this often?

 

[The Wanderer]

that's good mirror ball man!

Struck by little time we have together,
You will pass - but we'll again be like feathers

I will refer frogbatton to this thread, this is one for him...