heres a poetry?

[voxxie]

if the nigth become my friend
and your sight is just what i got
the death is much more worth to me
as you breath
as your mind
and you miss me today,maybe you cry
but the blood in my head
is now outside me

what do you think about it

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mexican poet but not a very good one

 

[voxxie]

the same in spanish

si la noche se vuelve mi amiga
y tu vista es todo lo que tengo
la muerte es mucho mas valiosa para mi
como tu aliento
como tu mente
y me extra?as hoy,talvez lloras
pero la sangre en mi cabeza
esta fuera de mi

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mexican poet but not a very good one