flatlines

[The Wanderer]

curves betray you
strip your insides
to a darker place

a lurgee of stars
and ripened fruit

fat swallowed tongue
tills the gardens.

haunt me
stalk my winters

and burst up-----
bloom over bone fragment

it's all I can stomach
to cut them down
with the unpure rain

 

[zooropamanda]

haunt me
stalk my winters

i love that
i can relate

 

[Kazd7]

some really cool stuff in here.Good job!

 

[famous rungi]

curves betray you

fat swallowed tongue
tills the gardens.

and burst up-----
bloom over bone fragment


You often come up with clever plays on words, titles and incongruous imagery (that are apt).

 

[The Wanderer]

blah, you know I jsut realized I messed it up slightly, I meant for it to read till the gardens instead of tills, there was supposed to be a pun in there with the next line, oh well, cant fix it now...

and thanks guys, thanks for the nice words foray