First time here-be nice to me!

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

OK, guys...I'm making myself vulnerable here, so be kind. This poem is called "Seven Hours":

time flies
when you don't feel the ache
it burns
like a candle in slow motion
dripping onto a cement floor
hardening and staying still
when you are alone
and the pain in your head
makes you feel as if your body
has declared war
deepening
weakening the core
of your stability
making the way you felt two weeks ago
seem like an eternal, awful dream
forever in your head, but out of your grasp


eek...there, I did it.

 

[baker6621]

I liked it, welcome. I come around here once in a while when I feel I can share something or need to read something by another person. I really like this forum and dream at HIGH volumes! Post anything you want!

 

[Bonochick]

I've felt like that many times...powerful words...

Thanks for sharin', Pop Whore...I mean, April...

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"I don't know you,
But you don't know the half of it..."

 

[SicilianGoddess]

Very nice sistah.

 

[LarryMullen's POPAngel]

Thanks for the feedback, guys!

I'll attempt to post back here more often!

 

[ACROB@T]

great first peice April, some parts hit home for me personally

keep sharing

 

[ACROB@T]

excuse the puffy smilie, its just a reminder that I haven't posted here in a while..should really

 

[wannabe]

makes you feel as if your body
has declared war

I love that line!!!