end of the line

[Zoomerang96]

this is a game we both play
together we win together we lose
you lay a hand on him again
and ill shove a barrel to the back of your head

drip the walls with his sweat
paint the team with one coat
ill tie you up and throw you down
finish you off like i should have before you could ever begin

this is your last warning
one more time and itll be too late
my brother is not someone you humitate and hate
unless you want me to decide your fate

fuck off

 

[Bonochick]

That reminds me of a twisted "comic" book I have.

I like it.

 

[ghetofabu]

I have been reading this everytime I come here and I keep thinking the same thing over and over again. It feels unfinished. I do like what you have though.

 

[Zoomerang96]

thanks gheto, and bchick.

i despise it, really i do. i was just agravated beyond comprehension when i wrote it. im never at this state, so now looking at it while being in a "normal" mood really makes me feel embarrased.

if i ever actually create lovely poems and post them here again, i will do my best to not rhyme. these lyrics are awful, its just something i slapped together really quickly.

thanks nonetheless.

 

[Ali Rose]

theres Something about your writing that i really like, bear.