Deeper

[U1]

Thanks for those last reponses. Here's an old thing that I hope won't disappoint you.



Dip it in the lips until it fits in the lid
Even if the sun still turns out to burn his tree
Erect in the net, the shipwrecked boy runs free
Pick me up when I sleep or when it slips too deep.

Lower than the whole of your soul lies my last will
Only feeling that the fall is a laugh with you
Very warm in the frost, I found home in your eyes
Evolving when you rise as the dawn was born lost.

 

[For Honor]

I see no reason to be dissapointed....


that is good.

I like how you used the words, especially the last two lines