deep deep thoughts

[-macphisto-]

Make what you want,
time is soft but swallowed,
in deep silence of the innocence,
your mistaken, what is heard
deep deep thoughts
deep deep thoughts

dont allow to creep in
wasted words to unveil
yours is mine unkept
tighten the bolt
with a crecent wrench
deep deep thoughts
deep deep thoughts

poisened angel leads me
from reason to doubt
deep deep thoughts
can only destroy

 

[wizard2c]

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Good writing.

Some people are thinkers and some are not.
Most live their days tending their fields
hoping their dreams will come true
trying to cope
so they settle for what is handed them
make contentment what is sold
never asking questions....
then there are the thinkers.

carol
wizard2c

 

[For Honor]

both good posts

For a second, I wass a little freaked out because I thouhg it was just one person writing a critique of their own poem (because the same avatar)



deep thoughts are.,.........



they can be misleading, I've overthought many times.



Efven after you think it out, and find the indifference....
you still have to decide what you want to do right now.



That is one of my latest discoveries....