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BabyGrace

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You're nestled, warm
Safe on a pile of tattered blankets
Heaped in the corner.
You've come in
From a night of cat-eye carousing,
From secrets I won't ever know
But for once,
I don't need to know.

Your pretty face of innocent grace
I watch your pink tongue flashing
Over the baby fur on your shoulder blade,
Craning your head to reach the most ridiculous places.
You settle down tucked in a delicate
Warm ball of life; fur and spiderleg whiskers,
Wet little nose in such a small body.

I watch you breathe slowly,
All your concentration on the moment,
Your life so simple;
The world shimmers, sighing
And taking in a deep breath with
The rise of your perfect rib cage; the horizon
Slowly expands...

I think of all the other warm corners in this cold world,
All the other tired girls lying on their beds watching
The slow, intent sleep of such precious life;
I feel the clutter leave me
And at least for now,
Everything is pure again.
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it's cliche and boring I know, this just came from listening to the Pumpkins' Thirty-Three and watching my Gracie sleep. sometimes we just find peace in the small things, especially animals and their approach to life for me, and I kinda wanted to put it down in words.
 
Its not boring! I loved that line
"Safe on a pile of tattered blankets
Heaped in the corner. "

You always right about so many different subjects BG. Not boring at all.


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I am a cowgirl of funk*
 
That is actually a very cute little poem you have there.

The way you can pull off "Your pretty face of innocent grace" is wonderful, and sounds very orginal.

Nice work there Babygrace.
 
its a great versatility you have BG..something to be proud of

I would agree people don't take the small things in life inside nearly enough..me included
 
secrets I won't ever know
But for once,
I don't need to know...

spiderleg whiskers...

I think of all the other warm corners in this cold world...


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speak to me in a language I can hear,
humor me before I have to go...


[This message has been edited by The Wanderer (edited 03-13-2002).]
 
you know I asked a teacher about this because I figured well, I'm allowed to look like an idiot to a teacher plus I knew he'd be nice about it even if he thinks I'm a lousy writer, but he said a lot of an author's writing will look boring and similar to the author, and that it's just part of the voice of the person..and that in time, the author's writing will expand anyway with experience. Hopefully he is right

but anyway thanks for your comments guys, I love being able to come here and share, and be taken seriously regardless of how I write things
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