clockwork

[adypole]

The ground beneath my sole will see
Surrender fall unto it’s knees
As crumbling ground rots underfoot
the clocks clockwork will halt abrupt

She said my cry was pride not weep
The joyous shrill, earths air I breathe
And so I cry my weep once more
The haunting shrill, the silent war

AdrianPole09

 

[youtooellen]

i really like this. awesome writing.

i think the second stanza is excellent.

 

[vaz02]

Sing this to the music of Feel Good Inc or Staring At The Sun and it works fucking awesome imo.

 

[Bonochick]

Beautiful.

 

[BonoFox1]

Nice!