best without me

[Solar Supernova]

once accused, youll always be my victim
watch people push too far and fall
youve pulled from within and seen yourself stall

so boost the power in your heart
before i pull the plug and witness first hand
the dreams you have sinking quickly in the sand

your perfect dont you see
ill let go of your hand
your world will brighten without me

throw the dice, look at the deal
bet on the odds that arent real
youve lost your money, you were never my prized steal

forgive me for this torment
so much you gave to me you wont see until your end

the innocence in your eyes
burned into me, i can still visualize
carry on,
time will prove ive never told you a lie
when i say
im not worth your time

to hold your hand
was me in command
fantasy never fully achieved
what your missing youll soon find
your gonna be better without me

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Well thats about it. I have alot of things I need to do today, but I wanted to write something, and take a look at it later. Just me taking the role of the girls in my relationships. Certainly not my perspective on things, but rather theirs. I like the part of them telling me im not worth their time, cause its always such a clever and conveniant way of them trying to say "oh its not your fault, its mine"-bullshit. I thought it might be interesting to look at it there way.

 

[BabyGrace]

it is always good to try and see things from someone else's perspective...you want me to be honest though? I liked the poem even better without the explanation

and I'm not trying to be critical at all, I do the same thing myself, I use poetry to talk about things I'm afraid to talk about and then I go and ruin it with an explanation because the poem made me brave.

your perfect dont you see
ill let go of your hand
your world will brighten without me

that's painful. possibly they really do feel that way? So many people seem to get in a relationship and decide that they really are not good enough for the person they love..

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You make yourself vulnerable to change in your life. But in the end, you've got to become the change you want to see in the world.
-the B-man