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frogbat

The Fly
Joined
Jul 25, 2000
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damn rhyme, I'm becoming an addict...


take me down to the river
take me to where it runs deep
let me get ready for the great sleep
so that from life?s dividends I can reap
Oh take me to the river to wash away my sins

I had said I wanted to fight upstream
found it a futile dream

wanted to turn the tide
and in your eyes open wide
i wished to jump in and hide

and for the time I wished to bide
before my love had died
and before the river ran dry

before I found you had lied

seeing you poke the wound in my side
while you spoke of the times and of the tries
you made me choke
whilst you took life for a ride

now look at you raking in - the goodbyes
look at you still - making me smile and sigh

[This message has been edited by frogbat (edited 12-30-2000).]

[This message has been edited by frogbat (edited 12-30-2000).]
 
WOW
*applause*

I was looking for inspiration all around the place, but never realised it was in my backyard.

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Even If That Doesn't Ring True.
 
its de froggie..

i really like this one, boy
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shoot it straight and good
only way to do it
 
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