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Old 08-31-2000, 02:32 AM   #1
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"A Woman needs a man like . . ."

yeah, you guessed it . . . anyway, I thought that quote was a good way to introduce this next poem, which I am quite fond of--so don't be too critical!


"The Kissing Fish"

Beautiful fish swim.
How the Water loves to touch you!
You kiss it gently as it replenishes your life.
Does it sadden you that that you must stay immersed in the Water's kingdom?
Is it lonely in the depths of your lover's heart?
Do you swim free,
or is that bowl too small?


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Old 08-31-2000, 02:44 AM   #2
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Ahhh....love the ending! Unexpected and sudden. It's the twists and turns in poetry I love...

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Old 09-04-2000, 04:47 AM   #3
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the beauty of love and all its confines...

so in love that the lovers can't find their way through...
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