Bad, vocal & acoustic guitar cover - any suggestions?

[hatrickpatrick]

YouTube - U2 - Bad (Acoustic guitar & Vocal cover)

Be interested to hear if people think it's ok, God awful, or whatever
Any suggestions for improving it? I'm aware that I left out a few lines at the end, I didn't actually leave them out but my laptop shafted me by losing battery just before I could sing the Lou Reed snipet!

 

[hatrickpatrick]

Sorry to anyone who tried to watch, it only just finished processing! Remind me to check that next time

 

[quadcaster]

Your voice reminds me of Cat Stevens